Hurting the Ecosystem…
Hurting the Ecosystem
Cartoon by Kaladhar Bapu
FISHY…O’…FISHY…
A lot I’ve heard about the Earth
I’ve been craving to come out since my birth;
Heard about the wonderful blue sea…
Also about many a GREEN TREE
I’ve only dreamt about the colours of the rainbow
How I wish to see the river flow….
I’m wanting to see the milky sky
Beneath it I want to fly…
How the stars shine bright,
I‘d love to dance under the moonlight
I’d love to smell the fragrance of the flower;
Under the waterfall I’d like to take a shower.
The cool breeze I’d want to feel
Become my master – Open the seal
MOM TAUGHT ME..
Whoever will show you the beautiful Earth…
At their service I should be till death
OH’ LITTLE GIN…
How I wish I’d set you free,
Your master I’d always love to be;
But now it is no more a PARADISE…
Everyday MOTHER EARTH cries.
The gases which I breath every day,
Have turned me from ORANGE to GREY.
Green trees are history;
Rain and Rainbow are a mystery.
………No more you can see the SHINING STAR
But you can see that in the OZONE there is a SCAR
Water is BLUE – NO MORE
Contaminants it has – TILL THE CORE
The virus which was invented by HUMAN
Is making this a land of NO-MAN
The virus is called POLLUTION
It’s high time we begin with a SOLUTION
Composed by Komal Mangu
April 3rd, 2009 at 9:56 pm
Hey Chinni, this is excelent and specially I liked the concept.
You better reserve the rights before someone copy it and you are awesome and keep it up.
-Kura
April 4th, 2009 at 12:13 am
Hey Komal,
This is awesome…never knew u were such a good poet…keep up the grt wrk .:)..loved d concept ..smethin which can reach to all ages…and make one think over on how it make dis paradise a better place to live in again…
-Shivvi
April 4th, 2009 at 4:27 am
Hey Mangu,
I never knew that your so good at poetry : D
You have composed it innovatively. Hope to see more of such stuff…Way to go…Keep up the good work!!!
Good Luck
April 4th, 2009 at 6:09 am
WOWWWWWWWWWW!
What a great cartoon!
Nice idea, cool drawing, fantastic colors!
Perfect! Fantastic!
I loved that!
April 4th, 2009 at 10:27 am
Hey Komal
Too gud
I din’t know dat u r a gr8 poet 
Loved ur cartoon..ur message has been conveyed very well..
Keep going!!
April 4th, 2009 at 10:56 am
I wished I could find something like this sometime, somewhere….
Here it is……!!! both cartoon and the poem are sensible and thoughtful.
Cool idea.., but lot more stuff to be added I suggest.
“Green trees are history;
)
Rain and Rainbow are a mystery” ……( good to quote
April 4th, 2009 at 11:33 am
great indeed! tidy work with the pen and the brush. hope u’ll practise both with the same ease and dexterity. really good.
- kishore
April 4th, 2009 at 2:00 pm
Hey Komal..
Excellent piece of work…
Just 2 gud…
Keep it up..
April 4th, 2009 at 6:01 pm
hai komi,
its nice,somewhere someone has to start the protection of our mother ‘Nature’ I suppose,and u took the initiation its admirable.
it is amiable,but you should add upon somemore concepts to make it more
attractive,
goodluck
nagu
April 4th, 2009 at 7:40 pm
Nice one Komal…..very thoughtful……
I liked the ending…”Green trees are history;
Rain and Rainbow are a mystery”
Good one ….Keep going….and please keep me updated…..All the best…!!!!!
April 5th, 2009 at 9:49 am
great………… thanks Madhavi for posting it !!!
April 5th, 2009 at 2:37 pm
hey,
The poem is very well written.. and the whole concept is very nice..:-)
April 5th, 2009 at 7:46 pm
good cartoon wit a great message and an apt poem relating to the changing life leading to the destruction….
April 6th, 2009 at 6:36 am
superb,lovely cartoon.
i am also sick of the pollution.
suggest a way to get into the bottle, safe from the dirty surrondings!
April 6th, 2009 at 7:32 am
Hey Komal…
Awesome!!!! Simply Superb….Loved your thoughts and the way you portrayed it……..Good Work…Cheers…..Keep it up!!!!
April 6th, 2009 at 9:19 am
Hey! Komal. This one’s just AWESOME!!!
I knew you liked poetry since school but those were funny n cute,
but this is really a thought provocating poem. Good thought with a good move for a great cause.
April 6th, 2009 at 10:14 am
“Green trees are history;
Rain and Rainbow are a mystery.”
i like this one, it makes ppl to think atleast for a min..
April 6th, 2009 at 2:02 pm
Hi Komal
U r great architect of words as well. Its a surprise for me.
Nice thought provoking poem. Hope our generation understand and become more disciplined in saving the best gift by God.
Keep it up!
Regards
Lalit/Sapna/Menitha
April 6th, 2009 at 5:24 pm
Excellent articulation of today’s problem we all have on hand.
Time is running out.. and we should do everything to save the earth.
April 9th, 2009 at 12:45 pm
Excellent thought, I can imagine a mother not wanting to give birth to her child.
I cant stop myself from mentioning a song from Gulaal movie http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=r0S3JZdaENs .
though its not directly related to pollution, but general human behavior towards our own world.
…
Manzil yeh kehti tab insaan se ki,
Tumhari hai tum hi sambhalo yeh duniya,
Yeh bujhte hue chand baasi charago,
Tumhare yeh kale iraado ki duniya,
Ohh ri duniya
…